This I Believe
When Catie died, my life changed. Not to sound like a broken record, but it truly did. My feeling from when I wrote the first draft of this paper to now have not changed one bit, so the majority of revision I made were grammatical. I think that I used a lot of what I learned later on in the course without really knowing it. This paper is heavy on emotions, and uses anecdotes to sink the story into the hearts of the readers. I couldn't edit this paper too much without taking away from my feelings. I do like this paper, and it gets the message across without being long.
